Monday, October 28, 2013

Seventh Graders!

In October's Scholastic issue, there was a contest for a "Fabulous First-Line!"

Here is a link to the video we watched in class if you need to review:

http://www.scholastic.com/scopemagazine/Issues/100113/Reproducibles.html#?custom=true&width525&height=425

Scroll down to find the video, "Video: Wht is a Fabulous First Line?"

Comment below with your name and your "Fabulous First-Line!"

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  1. Write your best Fabulous First Line here.....

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  3. The white-hot, searing paing rushes to every one of his muscles but his body soon became cold and dead feeling.

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  4. He wretched grabbing his stomach as he stared at the lifeless body infront of him.

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  7. She didn't know what to do, she panicked over the sight of the bloody knife and the murdered body.

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  8. After laying there for several harsh,cold days and nights, he thoght that he was going to die a terrible unpeicful death.

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  9. "As James, Alec, and Kris stayed in the haunted school into the dark room they could see figures of the haunted dead school kids"

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  10. Mr game and watch was walking in the snow with his wife when all the sudden a stranger came up and said where's your money?

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  11. I still remember it like it was yesterday the screaming the cheering the bombs bursting in air the war was finally over but we thought wrong it just got worse.

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  12. As the barn burned,my heart did to.

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  13. My house was in flames when I turned down my driveway.

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